Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 16 May 2016

The Age Of The Kid



Learning Reflection

I am learning to write an imaginative adventure story.
I am so proud of putting realism into my story to make it better and more interesting.
It can be tricky to add in details.It can be tricky to write in paragraphs.
My buddy can help me with my story.
The next step for me in my learning might be to write in paragraphs.

Tuesday, 12 April 2016

The Explorer




I am learning to write a recount.
I am so proud of being able to putting all the details in.
It can be tricky to remember to add in all the punctuation.
The Thesaurus could help me to get better words.
The next step for me in my learning is to write one by myself.

Friday, 4 March 2016

Year 6 Welcome Post



Welcome to Year 6.  My name is Braedan and I am now in Room 21.  This year I am looking forward to making new friends and learning new skills.  One of my goals for this year is to be in the Rugby Team for school.  My responsibilities so far this year are being a Recycling Monitor.  I am enjoying being in an all boys class. 

Friday, 14 August 2015

How to Make Windchimes - Explanation Writing

My reflection

I have been learning to  write an explanation for an audience.  I found this easy because had made a windchime and so I knew what to say.  The next step is to do a better conclusion.

Friday, 7 August 2015

Explanation Writing - How to Make a Rugby Tackle







My Reflection  
I was learning to write explanation it was hard cause i dont play rugby. My next step is to write about something I do know about and do it faster.

Friday, 31 July 2015

Learning about Explanation Writing


My Reflection 
I  have been learning about Explanation Writing. I now know that Explanation wiring tells about how something works. I found the quiz easy because I know the answers.
My next step is to write my own Explanation
  


Wednesday, 22 July 2015

T3 WK1 HOLIDAY



                                                                  My Reflection
I learnt about rugby union heaps more.

Monday, 29 June 2015

Term 2 Week 9

On Tuesday 9 June 2015 me and my friend Riley and I learnt heaps about the brain and it was fun and I was working hard on A-Z Challenge.And it was

Monday, 15 June 2015

My Speech Brain Storm



I was learning to write a brainstorm for my speech.  We used a POPPLET  to record our brainstorm.  I used the information I already know about Minecraft to brainstorm ideas.  My next step is to find more information and facts from the internet.

Friday, 5 June 2015

100 WORD CHALLINGE

MORE THAN 100 WORD CHALLENGe

ONE NIGHT I WENT FOR A WALK WITH MY FRIEND IN A DEEP AND DARK FOREST the silence was deafening ALL  AROUND ME SO REALLY QUICKLY WE STARTED TO RUN EXTREMELY FAST AWAY AND OUT OF THE DEEP AND DARK FOREST. IT WAS AS SCARY AS SPOOKERS!!!!!!!! THEN WE CONTINUED OUR JOURNEY BACK HOME THEN WE WENT TO SLEEP.  THEN WE WOKE UP THE NEXT MORNING WE WENT BACK IN THE FOREST WITH OUR OTHER FRIEND JEFF HE WASN’T SCARED OF ANYTHING SO WE TRIED TO MAKE HIM REALLY SCARED OF THE FOREST.  SO WE ADDED IN SOME SOUND EFFECTS TO MAKE HIM EXTREMELY SCARED SO THAT HE WOULD PEE HIS PANTS!!!!!!  THEN HE DID PEE HIS PANTS HE ALMOST VOMITED TOO!!!! (HE DID ACTUALLY VOMIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)

Wednesday, 18 March 2015

My Bio Poem


My Reflection

I was learning to write a bio poem.  I had to tell you my siblings, things I like and things I don't like.  It was easy because it was easy to think of ideas.  My favourite part is the part about the clock tower.

Thursday, 20 November 2014

my narrative

I was learning how  to write a narrative.  It was tricky to plan the plot.
I am proud that I have written a narrative.
Next time I am going to write a follow up on my story.

Monday, 4 August 2014

what is a pencil

                                       

   I am learning how to write an explanation.


 What is a pencil?


                             A pencil is an object to draw with.
                                     You can colour with it.                                                                      It is made out of wood.                                        You can sharpen it. 






My Reflection.It was tricky to find the right words.
I was proud that I know more about a pencil.
Next I will try hard.